CATEGORY | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
FOCUS Point of View - Purpose | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation. | There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear. | It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation. |
FOCUS Point of View - Awareness of Audience | Strong awareness of audience in the design. Students can clearly explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students find it difficult to explain how the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.
| Limited awareness of the needs and interests of the target audience.
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CONTENT General | Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 8-9 pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 6-7 pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate | Photostory contains 5 or fewer pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate |
CONTENT Images | Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/metaphors | Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors. | An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical. | Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone. |
ORGANIZATION Sequencing of Information | Graphics & story line are organized in a clear, logical way. The story is easy to follow. | Most information is organized in a clear, logical way. One picture seems to be out of place. | Two or more pictures seem to be out of place making the story difficult to follow. | There is no clear story. Pictures seem to be sequenced randomly. |
STYLE Voice - Consistency | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the majority (85-95%) of the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible through some (70-84%)of the presentation. | Voice quality needs more attention. |
STYLE Voice - Pacing | The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story. | Occasionally speaks too fast or too slowly for the story line. The pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation) is relatively engaging for the audience. | Tries to use pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation), but it is often noticeable that the pacing does not fit the story line. Audience is not consistently engaged. | No attempt to match the pace of the storytelling to the story line or the audience. |
STYLE Layout | Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing. The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read.
| Layout is creative and visually appealing. The fonts, colors, and background almost provide a clear theme. It is generally an easy presentation to read and follow.
| Layout is visually appealing although some slides may be too cluttered or too empty. The fonts, colors, and background do not necessarily provide a theme and there may be parts that are difficult to view/read.
| Layout lacks visual appeal and is sometimes too cluttered or too empty. It may be confusing at times. The fonts, color, and background do not work well together in the presentation making it difficult to view/read. There may be too many types of fonts, etc.
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CONVENTIONS Grammar | Grammar and usage were correct. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, and errors did not detract from the story. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, but errors detracted from story. | Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story. |
CONVENTIONS Pictures/Graphics | Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Some pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are not clear and are not in focus
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- Geography (area you live, where extended family lives, places you visited that influenced you, landscape of where you live - urban, rural, etc): i live on staten Island, New york. my family is originally from Trinidad and Tobago
- Gender: I am a female
- Religion: I am christian
- Economic Class (Upper, Middle, Lower): i belong to the middle class
- Race/Ethnic Group:
- Abilities: I believe i give god advice and a good friend. I am a really good swimmer and i have now decided to participate in sports
- Likes/Dislikes (music, books, arts, sports, etc) i have like many different types of music , Alternative Rock , Rap , Hip Hop , Slow jams. i think all music has some kind of meaning to it .
- Social Groups You Belong To:
- Special Groups (Volunteer, etc.):
- Issues You Care About: Hati's earthquake , poverty, sexual abuse, the rapid spread of harmful disease
- Family Characteristics (size, occupations, family traditions, stories, etc): i have a really large family all my grand parents have many brothers and sisters. I have have aunts uncles and cousins. We really dont have family traditions, I guess every year around christmas we get together and spend time with family, the same for New years and any other major holiday.
- Dreams & Future Plans (careers, places you want to explore, etc): my dream is to be either a social studies teacher or work in the field of forensics. I like to learn about dead things and how they died so i think my career would most likely be in the forensics field
- Geography (area you live, where extended family lives, places you visited that influenced you, landscape of where you live - urban, rural, etc):
- Gender:
- Religion:
- Economic Class (Upper, Middle, Lower):
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- Abilities:
- Likes/Dislikes (music, books, arts, sports, etc)
- Social Groups You Belong To:
- Special Groups (Volunteer, etc.):
- Issues You Care About:
- Family Characteristics (size, occupations, family traditions, stories, etc):
- Dreams & Future Plans (careers, places you want to explore, etc):